Thursday, September 9, 2010

Unperfect

                      I'm not a perfect girl.
    My hair doesn't always stay in place &
    I spill things a lot. I'm pretty clumsy &
      sometimes I have a broken heart.
      My friends & I sometimes fight &
     maybe somedays nothing goes right.
but when I think about it & take a step back
     I remember how amazing life truly is
      & maybe. Just maybe. I like being
                         unperfect..
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4 comments:

  1. Mrs. BensonSeptember 9, 2010 at 3:24 PM

    Maxcine,

    I love your use of color in this poem. It really brings you into the poem, highlighting the point of the poem nicely. Where did you get this idea and how did you decide which words to highlight?

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  2. MaxcineSeptember 10, 2010 at 3:57 PM

    Thank You Mrs. Benson!!
    Well i highlighted the words that shows I am unperfect. I got this idea from me spilling thinks, being clumsy at times, and having bad hair days.

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  3. sunsearai13October 6, 2010 at 12:54 PM

    i like this one.everybody is not perfect or as you say unperfect

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  4. MaxcineOctober 6, 2010 at 1:05 PM

    yup i am pefect though i NEVER mess up i jocking i always mess things up

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